If you have to wonder “hm, is that clear enough?” it probably isn’t. Because if you need a moment to think about it, your reader will need a moment to think about it, too, and you want your reader to spend absolutely no time whatsoever thinking! At least, you don’t want them thinking about where to go next. You want them thinking about your story and characters, so make the technical stuff really easy on them. It will help them enjoy your story.
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